Platformer level~

So the first assignment for Game Design II is to design an introductory platformer level! 

So that is my rough papermap

and that is my illustrator drawing.

• Where is it? What time of year is it? What time of day is it?
• It's located near a small village located in the hills. I imagine it is summer or spring, as everything is still green. The time of day is night time~
• What is the conflict? What is the twist?
• You're the sherriffdetective of the small town near the hills, and you have to collect the coins to follow the path that the grand thief used to escape and catch him.
• Who else lives here?
• People live here, and also animals like bunnies and wolves. 
• What does their architecture look like?
• cute little village houses.
• What happened in the environment prior to the player getting there?
• It's a quiet night, a night where no one would expect to be robbed. 
• How did the player arrive to the environment? What brought them there?
• The small town life was one you always wanted, quiet, calm. I guess that's what also attracted the thief.